Rock N Roll Poem by Rini Shibu

Rock N Roll

Rating: 5.0


Babe dance with me
Sing with me
It's time to rock
and make love
As the drums beat
faster is my heart beats
But you are with me
to sip little  whiskey
and then I miss my beat
The light is dim
But the love is bright
And the love you give
Is the light of my life

Wednesday, February 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
valsa george 05 March 2018

This can be sung like a song! Lovely write!

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Valsa mam..! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 February 2018

WOW! This love is so special, the light of my life! Mesmerizing poem! A 10 for the vote. A loveliest poem, Rini! Thank you for sharing

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Rini Shibu 23 February 2018

Thank you so much Sylvia for the visit and posting your comment..! !

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Muzahidul Reza 22 February 2018

As the drums beat faster is my heart beats, .. wow! well write, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10

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Rini. 22 February 2018

Thanks Muzahidul..! ! !

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Daniel Brick 22 February 2018

I'm not really a fan of rock n roll music but I really like how you linked rock n roll with the discovery of love. There is a freshness of language and imagery in your poem, and of course this sudden recognition of true love sweeps the speaker and us readers. Who can resist such a powerful loft to their mood?

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Rini Shibu 22 February 2018

Thanks Daniel for the visit..Glad to see your comment

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Lamar Cole 21 February 2018

This is a very enjoyable poem about the light of my life.

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Rini Shibu 22 February 2018

Thanks Lamar..Glad you enjoyed.! !

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