Rock And Roll And Rhythm Comments

Vampire Life-style - I don't know how literally you intend the confession of being a vampire? It could be real or it could be a metaphor. Either way it shows an extreme commitment to a nocturnal life-style. You convey the lure of night life, which doesn't take vampirism to be successful; the night is a setting with its own secrets and delights and heightening of experience. I consciously kept rock rhythms in my mind as I read, because music is an integral part of your poem. It has the liberating quality which we adopt under its spell.