Sunday, October 12, 2008

Robson Street Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wobbles like sneaks.
Some are too gay looking
To be real
Like images we can see these days on store’ windows at Robson Street.
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Roland Bastien
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Onelia Avelar 19 October 2008

Really hyper real (if this is the gradation after surreal) . I like the personage of 'a Chinese woman, a Proust’s character' which 'dresses a 50’s fashion designed cloth' and 'choreographs the crowd'. I think the whole poem is influenced by Proust's manner 'In Search of Lost Time'. Enjoyable reading...Regards, one

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Tsira Goge 16 October 2008

Very picturesque poems. It is read as a mystical short story... 10... Tsira

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