Monday, May 4, 2009

Robbed A Matilda Comments

Rating: 4.5

'to the tune waltz sing matlida'

Once a V8 driver stopped at a petrol pump,
And saw that fuel was priced at two dollars and three
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You... don't... want me...
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Isaiah Grey 09 May 2009

Interesting theme and nice bit of irony going on. Are you going to continue it...?

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Saadat Tahir 09 May 2009

you v made a very nice yarn....unfortunately doesnt stick in real life... maybe thats why u left it incoplete... crafty there but very nice read just like a pinna colada in the summer heat cheers

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Chitra - 09 May 2009

a nice poetic spin off...well tuned

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