Rob We Filled St. Mary's Comments

Memorial service on a rainy day, filtering back with the interruption of the ibis screaming! What a great little poem well done! Neil

This poem is also of a very high quality. The vicar's voice raised above impious hadedas - great line! Slicked and jounced out of place - another enjoyable line. Vivid images. But not for Poemhunter, which has become a rubbish dump of late.