Roaring Comments

stunning job is done

very philosophical....n...thought provoking

beautiful words with in-depth meaning. bravo!

Turbulence on the surface secret something wide Mystical the ocean too have posses mystery inside Unrevealed until we dive deep to see never seen side Now we know discover life as we know how to get bright_UNwritten Soul

Holymoly, holydooly! This poem on nature simple, straight forward yet it has a divine charm or may be the charm of nature itself... This poem is totally different from other poems and has fresh look of the teen girl, Great going and hope that you can wrought many similar wonders on Nature, the mighty stature... the poem is rated A1!

Holymoly, holydooly! This poem on nature simple, straight forward yet it has a divine charm or may be the charm of nature itself... This poem is totally different from other poems and has fresh look of the teen girl, Great going and hope that you can wrought many similar wonders on Nature, the mighty stature... the poem is rated A1!

Congrats as you poem is there in the Legendary list of top 500, (Another poem) A great haiku, and hope that you can produce many Haiku's like this, Yes sky always roars with mystic speech, You conveyed well and beyond anybody else can do with mere 3 short lines! Hats of Wahabji!

Beautiiful Haiku.

A great Haiku I agree with Salema, good use of the metaphor and feminime in her own soul inside.

A strong haiku, well done, I agree with Salema Khatun and the metaphor and the feminine for the ocean and its many powerful and complex characteristics.

Ocean, Green or blue or iron-gray' As the light strikes you' Primordial flood, Relentless and remorseless Like a woman in rage. Mongameli Mabona's THE SEA is reminded by this short poem beautifully written...

You tell us a real thing. Thank you. I like it very much. The poem is very good.Thanks Thanks.............

A really beautiful poem, a fantastic write.

Roaring of sea Buzzing of bee All I can hear when I'm not buzy)))) ******************** I like your haiku......'tis a nature haiku! ! !

This is a very nice haiku, the word ''roaring'' signifies a lot , in our life too...hence a good use of the metaphor. I like the little poem very much.