Roaring clouds gather
makes me all remember
the days which had special feeling
where no walls had any peeling
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roaraing clouds..fine metaphor used to describe the cyclic nature of life...don't worry some day these roaring clouds will begin to pour to wash away the humdrum of life.
A beautiful imagery floating positive attitude....a sure 10
it is all cyclic, Deepti...things get repeated...watch out what happens after the present gathering of roaring clouds...good write 10
10 for this lovely verse. Love it. Wonderful metaphors.