Monday, August 25, 2008

Roaring Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Roaring clouds gather
makes me all remember
the days which had special feeling
where no walls had any peeling
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Deepti Agarwal
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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 September 2008

10 for this lovely verse. Love it. Wonderful metaphors.

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Chitra - 04 September 2008

roaraing clouds..fine metaphor used to describe the cyclic nature of life...don't worry some day these roaring clouds will begin to pour to wash away the humdrum of life.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 29 August 2008

A beautiful imagery floating positive attitude....a sure 10

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Kesav Easwaran 25 August 2008

it is all cyclic, Deepti...things get repeated...watch out what happens after the present gathering of roaring clouds...good write 10

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