Roaming The Rolling Hills Comments

Charles, this is an excellent piece. I was along for the ride all the way. I get how the pictures add up moment to moment like the images in this poem. The last lines are wonderful and complete the piece. A solid 10. Wishing you well for the holidays, Hugh

hi..wats up? i do agree with ur each line..this such a great poem..gets all the way 10..good job regards, ASHKA

I think I just enjoyed the flow of your movement and story telling, impressive write.

Scary, touching, appropriate and thought-provoking juxtaposition as ever. When are your poems going to be studied for A-levels (or would that be an insult! ! ! ! !)