Wednesday, January 13, 2016

Roaming Around World Comments

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The more I learn, the less I know
I am like a closed window
The more I run, the less I reach
I am roaming around lost beach
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Fatemeh Tarkashvand
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Denis Mair 03 May 2016

Reading this, I join you in feeling great sadness and unfathomable grief. This poem admits helplessness but also carries powerful moral force. Because of horrors witnessed, all of life feels like an act of weeping. When beasts shed the blood of innocents, the rose's pretense of aloofness is a travesty of beauty.

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Kelly Kurt 20 January 2016

A very poignant poem, Fatemeh. I think that the majority of ALL people just want peace. It is our so called leaders and governments who act selfishly

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Fatemeh Tarkashvand 21 January 2016

Thanks for leaving comment dear. Ya. I do agree with you but some extrimist who terror people make world unsafe for all people not matter it is France or USA or Lebnan and... they kill people who dont have much role in politic.

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Manonton Dalan 13 January 2016

I love peace//////////

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 January 2016

You are a messenger of peace. Beautiful write. Keep up the good work.

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Denis Mair 03 May 2016

Your perceptive comment goes straight to the essence of this powerful plea.

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