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'- Fare lonely as rhinoceros-

Time washes faded impressions Longings create ever new patterns Mind grows young, but body getting weaker! The more we want to extricate ourselves from longings that pin us down, the more we are entangled in wild aspirations and longings! This dilemma is so beautifully put in choicest words! You deserve a10 Savita!

To let this mind roam free Calm and peace full in silence Steps for meditation to attain tranquility are nicely given. Thank you.

written with great imagery to let this mind roam free calm and peace full in silence

today is your day write more poems if you can. whatever you will write will be outstanding like this lovely poem.