Brilliant lines in its simplicity. A powerful and insightful write on life. Like the picture that goes with the poem. It enhances the beauty of this write. Very creative. The sky and sea were mingled creating an extraordinary scene.
a well written haiku! rodes showing the light and three different views to road, the life. such a beautiful poem.(*****)
Our journey continues with every passing breath... simple yet deep...
The journey of the wise do not end........ keep journeying my dear poet. thank u for this great idea. tony
Where all walks begin. Some are quick to find its end. Wise keeps journeying...........impressive expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem on journey nicely executed. Enjoyed with photo provided.10
Salamat po. Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to enjoy and comment. Thanks again.
yeah no end there is some wanna make the end and some become wise here