Monday, April 29, 2024

Roads Marked With Tears And Pain Comments

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roads marked
with tears and pain
are scorched
in drought flooded
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Terence George Craddock
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 April 2024

Thank you, Terence, for your efforts and time in reading and commenting on my poem Trickle Of Thoughts and for this well expressed and presented poem.

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p1 reading poetry thoughts ideas written in beauty, composed by the poetess Rose Marie Juan-austin, has often illuminated a warm smile in the eyes, enriched a few moments minutes in sometimes life hectic busy days, sometimes I have been blessed

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p2 with a few lines in poetic responses, for the lovers of poetry reading delightful insightful good verse, is a purity of thought a mind rapture which blesses our day

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I wrote the poem 'Raptured In A Rose Marie Juan-austin: Poetic State Of Mind', inspired by a comment made on the poem 'Roads Marked With Tears And Pain', by the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin and dedicated to Rose Marie Juan-austin.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 April 2024

The difficulties we encountered in our journey and our solid faith will mold us to become stronger and better persons to face the storms that threaten our journey in life.

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p1 in this complex flexing ever changing contemporary society we live in, in a Western World of possessions objects desire distractions, faith is a life force under utilized under rated,

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p2 an enduring solid faith prayer felt prayer sustained strengthened, can on miraculous occasions overcome impassable barriers, heal restore bless beautify faith filled lives

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I wrote the poem 'Strong Faith In Conflict Society', inspired by a comment made on the poem 'Roads Marked With Tears And Pain', by the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin and dedicated to Rose Marie Juan-austin.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 April 2024

A wonderful and insightful poem on life. So true. We always make decisions in our journey that will lead us to the realization or non realization of our dreams.

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p1 roads in differing landscape scenery, differing diversity challenges destinations, are illuminating metaphors on life; we make constant daily decisions, most minor made as unconscious ease, thoughtless automatic responses; difficult decisions pose,

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p2 puzzle piece mind, consequence dilemmas; thoughts decisions define us, dictate personality life choice changes, decisions righteous or wrong can make or break us

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I wrote the poem 'Differing Diversity Challenges Destinations', inspired by a comment made on the poem 'Roads Marked With Tears And Pain', by the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin and dedicated to Rose Marie Juan-austin.

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