Roads In Life Comments

I don't care for potholes! But your poem slowed me down a bit!

I like this poem, it is very simple and true. The life has ups and downs and at the end of all, we can enjoy both.

I really like your poem, is interesting and it makes me feel you lost someone. You use alliteration in your poem in the therd line 'too' and 'together' Keep continue writting.