Roadmap Comments

Part 2] There is a great deal of skill in this- -I like the inclusion of his classic book collection to your list of important things he left behind- -it gives a subtle peek into the individuality of this man. That's the kind of detail that bring an image to the reader's mind- - -excellent inclusion

Part 1 ] I really really like this poem- I like how you expressed your idea- -but for myself, I would dump the exclamation points, they detract from the intellectual power of the poem for me. But that's just my opinion and a reflection of my own likes and dislikes.