Sunday, October 17, 2010

Roadkill Comments

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In the city of darkness
Stark grey roads wind and twist,
Paved over with asphalt
Colder than the hearts of the millionaires
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Leslie Ching
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Nick Lennert 20 August 2011

It's real. It's gritty and poetic- I like how the first verse is more mysterious, and then the single line 'Is there anything wrong' leads you into a more disturbing realm of imagery, such as, a line I liked, 'fur matted with blood, it's limp tail twitches like a marionette' and then, closing with the line 'No, there's nothing wrong' is the icing on the cake. Roadkill. Perfect!

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Leslie Ching

Leslie Ching

Toronto, ON, Canada
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