Friday, October 19, 2012

Road You Chosen Comments

Rating: 4.8

When I first met you my life,
you were adorned with word.
Nothing mucky could you touch.
Your road was I thought, homeward.
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Neela Nath Das
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Femi Oloidi 02 November 2012

Very nice! And expressive! kingfemi

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Hazel Durham 24 October 2012

A great heartfelt poem, with a sense of great loss of oneself, immersed in your lovers life you have to sow your own furrow!

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Sanjay Mehta 21 October 2012

Overindulgance, no overdependence or we can say giving up our own private space and violating others private space. If we respect each others private space relations can be cordial and can last till one desires. How nice would it be then. Universal theme well addressed. Thanks for sharing

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Akanksha Bhatt 21 October 2012

wonderful write dear. so beautifully penned by you! i loved it! ! ! ! thanks for share! :)

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The roads others choose often diverge from the one we have chosen. The solution lies in walking together ensuring that no parallel road can be laid and that is a chance of this complex life. The alternate path has its own thorns all along and they will come to know about it later. Just relax too..

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Asif Andalib 19 October 2012

Thought-provoking lovely write

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