The road to heaven is laden with a trail of tears
A patchy path of peaks and troughs pattered by dust
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Great use of words try to add how to get to heaven by belief in Christ and salvation are the steps.
this is what many hope for, but it's unfortunate that few could pass the way
In awe of the love you share in this poem for your own beliefs. Beautifully constructed with rich phrases! I like!
great piece. you have real talent.