Thursday, August 23, 2012

Road To Heaven Comments

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The road to heaven is laden with a trail of tears

A patchy path of peaks and troughs pattered by dust
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Godfrey Morris
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Mark Anthony St. Rose 22 September 2012

great piece. you have real talent.

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Margaret Haig 21 September 2012

Great use of words try to add how to get to heaven by belief in Christ and salvation are the steps.

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Oluwadamilare Adedayo 16 September 2012

this is what many hope for, but it's unfortunate that few could pass the way

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Stevie Taite 31 August 2012

In awe of the love you share in this poem for your own beliefs. Beautifully constructed with rich phrases! I like!

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Valerie Dohren 26 August 2012

A road we should all be traveling - wonderful write.

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Persian Khushi 24 August 2012

awesome writing. so much can be said. will to endure. :)

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Godfrey Morris

Godfrey Morris

Kingston, Jamaica
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