Road To End Comments

‘I want to get out of this waste land'… Lovey write.. loved it.

Where there is dark there is light. So, the questions put at the end help us find the Road to your land. Thank you very much for sharing this beautiful poem with us.

We have passion of poetry with the way to heaven into God's kingdom. This is within us. Awakening self we can find this and we can find path to God's abode via cosmic light. This poem is definitely very interestingly and excellently penned. CONGRATULATIONS!

If you wonder; think and delve. If you are also a poet; continue to write. That helps me to think and delve. Peace!

and Dust in this land! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Here, the things are aparted on the sand, Its mere ruined Culture and Anarchy on the Land. Will I find the Road to your land? .................Great poem reiterating the supremacy of faith over skepticism.

Simply beautiful. We have to go nowhere to look for the God. Nicely done. 'Oh! King no Road, no inn nor caves I need, Please Find the Exit to this Wasteland creed. Will I find the Road to your land? Or I will ever remain in Eliot's Wasteland. ' is so meaningful. Congrats.

congrats! A wonderful poem.

A poem of some merit. This offering is appropriate for this category.+++10

Dear Abhimanyu, such an interesting poem of the day... congrats for being chosen... huge 10++++

The Kingdom of God is within yourself, ........so true. A beautiful poem shared amazingly. Thanks and congratulattions for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

Beautiful poem.Thanks for sharing this beautiful thought.

WOW really superb thinking and versification

This is a really beautiful poem. Very interesting.

lot many impressive elements and references in this one...thoroughly enjoyed the connotative quality of it.

serious mock at a need of present with relation of past.

serious mock at a need of present with relation of past.

getting so many allusions you have united it with your meanings. best of your poems. best wishes

excellent work. taking tagore s and eliot s works in your work really good keep it up. and also true telling of the society 10