Road Song Comments

Masha, I think this would make a great song - but then again, it makes a great poem :) Just one question...what are Justines? Hugs Anna xxx

Hey Masha - I am progressively impressed. Your poetry is real and earthy. Great write and read. As far as songs, could be a good lyric - but I am not musical. But as I read this piece, 'Ventura Highway' was blasting as I drove along Route 1 in California with the top down. Nice memory. George

You're really good with the progression and so, story-telling is your forte' (or one of them) , I think... The rhyming is gracefully unobtrusive throughout. Great write. Est : ]

Love this one Masha..... you're certainly stepping on the gas here! A great write, takes the reader on a journey of voyeurism.... I can just see an ol' truck hurtling down the freeway....! Fantastic...... HG: -) xx

And an honorable mention it shall be.............hold it! ! ! ! ! We are talking copyrights infringment of writers privy, , , ETC. ETC. ETC......Great write and a great song of verse.................................................................