Sunday, May 20, 2007

Road Of Life Comments

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Time is passing
the circle is shrinking
road is gloomy
traveler is muddled
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syed muhammad furqan
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Hiraa Kazmi 18 June 2007

good subject matter and theme but somehow, the poem looks incomplete. something might be added to fill in the gaps. the writing style is good and it can be improved as well. keep writing.

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