Friday, March 19, 2010

*~~~riverside Sorrow~~~* Comments

Rating: 2.9

I wear the colour of your wings
I wear the melody of your string

Stars are playing
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Raju Baruah
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Rani Turton 15 April 2010

The closing line emphasises the rest of the text. Nature as always is dominant in the emotion of the poet.

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Rakhi Jayashankar 22 March 2010

Your love for Nature is clearly depicted in the poem. Being a nature lover i really appreciate it

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 19 March 2010

I loved it, sweet well chosen words, sensuous tone, great use of descriptive language, and a smooth flow of sensations, well done, Ro'ya

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Raju Baruah

Raju Baruah

Jhanji, Jorhat, Assam, India
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