Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Rivers Of Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are rivers that flow
Red tears from the brow
Meandering to the deep ocean
Whose edges're assaulted by emotion
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Kuda Bondamakara
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Chinedu Dike 30 August 2020

Really a poignant rendition in a verse with rhythmic splendour. Very passionate with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Kuda.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 May 2017

Who shall console the heart; When it has been left torn apart? sense of loss leads to despair..... but life is more than that. one who is able to get up and challenge and become great is really a man or a woman worth it.. thank you dear poet.. tony

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Kelly Kurt 18 September 2015

We must heal ourselves, Kuda. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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Kuda Bondamakara 18 September 2015

thanks for reading Kelly

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Miraj Raha 16 September 2015

the hopelessness is evident and the pain excruciating.peace be with you.

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Kuda Bondamakara 18 September 2015

thanks Miraj. Much appreciated.

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