Friday, July 2, 2010
Rivers Comments
Rating: ★5.0
You bleed pain like a hemophiliac with a slit wrist.
I try to add loving pressure but you resist.
You bleed on everyone around you forcing onto them your pain.
You don't care who you bleed around.
...
Read full text
COMMENTS
Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~
03 July 2010
Loved the metaphor here, rivers relating to pain, body and city. can be interpretted many ways. Good one; D
0
0
Reply
Best Poems
Best Member Poems
Best Classical Poems
New Poems
New Poets
Best Member Poets
Best Classical Poets
Explore Poems
Explore Poets
Poem Of The Day
Love Poems
Baby Poems
Death Poems
Sad Poems
Birthday Poems
Wedding Poems
Nature Poems
Sorry Poems
Hero Poems
Poetry E-Books
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/29/2025 9:32:45 AM # 1.0.0
Excellent Visual and visceral. You need to find an agent who can help you get your writing out