River, Tide, Run Comments

you grandma invited me to read this and i say that her invitation is not a waste because i can see a good poem here

i love it! it's genuine and alluring! the title is so well construct!

I love the title...your narrative speaks so well to it. your descriptions of fighting life's struggles and sorrows and not giving up are refreshing...so my dear grand daughter: keep flowing like the river; keep riding the tidal waves. Life is in constant movement...keep it moving! Love ya, Grandma