River Street Urchins Comments

An interesting write. But I did like the personalized colors of choice. Read mine - We the Unencumbered - Adeline

These words are very thoughtful. Till we're free, till we're free Till we're free, till we're free Till we're free, to go… We'll never clear-out: Absorbing as every stain might be.

This is a lovely write. I quite enjoyed it. It's almost musical in its composition.

I'll fabricate a new colour? A rainbows pot of gold… One for just you and me! It's great and wonderful..........................10

We too will rain holds so much power. well written and great work.

not bad, had trouble with the lines with we`re and were...

Great poem as always, my favorite Sounds like a deal, Maybe yes, maybe no His heart wants to come back But his sanity says no Break time Vacation, just pay a visit Yes or No, i dont know.......

I like your poetry, it is what reading. Keep the flag flying