Out for a hike on the trails by the river,
Chilly early morning almost makes me shiver.
Deck over the swamp comes with a guardrail,
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I'm glad. That makes the poem a success. It's just down the hill from where I used to work.
That's a lovely poem. A beautiful descriptive write. I feel like visiting this place. You have given such a charming picture.
Thank you for your kind words. It's just a little spot in town by a river that was made by the city after they acquired the land.
I have never been to where you were describing But I could feel everything while I was reading Love this poem, thanks Spock-10+++
A beautiful poem, Spock. Colorado is spectacular, do you get to have outings like this and see these things?
Yes, I was going on a hike about once a week until my headaches and operation. Hope to do it again soon. I have submitted a few poems about hikes. This one was relatively short, but nice to see nature and the out of doors. Thanks for your support.
I made a comment on this poem earlier. Why does it not show up here?
PoemHunter can be very slow. Both comments are there now.