Thursday, May 12, 2016

River's Edge Natural Area Comments

Rating: 5.0

Out for a hike on the trails by the river,
Chilly early morning almost makes me shiver.

Deck over the swamp comes with a guardrail,
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Spock the Vegan
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Grace Jessen 04 June 2016

I made a comment on this poem earlier. Why does it not show up here?

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Spock The Vegan 17 October 2016

PoemHunter can be very slow. Both comments are there now.

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Grace Jessen 04 June 2016

I enjoyed this poem. Felt I could see it all with you.

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Spock The Vegan 17 October 2016

I'm glad. That makes the poem a success. It's just down the hill from where I used to work.

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Nosheen Irfan 17 May 2016

That's a lovely poem. A beautiful descriptive write. I feel like visiting this place. You have given such a charming picture.

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Spock The Vegan 17 October 2016

Thank you for your kind words. It's just a little spot in town by a river that was made by the city after they acquired the land.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 May 2016

I have never been to where you were describing But I could feel everything while I was reading Love this poem, thanks Spock-10+++

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Spock The Vegan 13 May 2016

Thanks for your kind words and support.

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Spock The Vegan 17 October 2016

Thanks very much for your vote and kind words.

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Kelly Kurt 13 May 2016

A beautiful poem, Spock. Colorado is spectacular, do you get to have outings like this and see these things?

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Spock The Vegan 13 May 2016

Yes, I was going on a hike about once a week until my headaches and operation. Hope to do it again soon. I have submitted a few poems about hikes. This one was relatively short, but nice to see nature and the out of doors. Thanks for your support.

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