In the Viper room, where the music's loud
young Hollywood stars stand so proud
amongst them is RIVER, aged twenty three
who at 2am, would no longer be
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Your poems Are realy terible I read them all You are very jealous of me You just started to write poetry I been writting poetry for 11 years You don't seem to have a clue of what poetry is Poetry needs to have fire and spice That is what makes good poetry And my poems have that Yours don't I must tell you that I go to a poetry worshop here in Toronto Every second Sunday And you don't Plus I am more familiar with the god poets You don't I do also open mcike af the poetry cafe Which you don't So if you don't know about poetry don't comment on it You are an ammateur poet I am a profesional poet I will publish my Chapbook son I had three ofers by the publishers But I don't want to give them away So I will publish it myself
Thankyou Aldo. How do you know I dont go to a poetry class etc etc.... you 'seem' to know a lot about me! Thanks for the comments tho. At least I dont just repeat the title and leave it as that! ! ! !