Wednesday, January 27, 2016

River Of Rage Comments

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some tell of of a god of rage,
his black inhuman heart pulsing,
seething forth into our very veins,
feeling up our very hearts with,
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John kago
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John Kago 03 February 2016

your right Paul Reason, i was focused on that instance of madness and anger. a world without hope and forgiveness would be tragic

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Paul Reason 27 January 2016

Interesting. however I think your poem leaves no room for hope or forgiveness. both of which will never die from this world.

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