some tell of of a god of rage,
his black inhuman heart pulsing,
seething forth into our very veins,
feeling up our very hearts with,
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Interesting. however I think your poem leaves no room for hope or forgiveness. both of which will never die from this world.
your right Paul Reason, i was focused on that instance of madness and anger. a world without hope and forgiveness would be tragic