The meticulous play of melodious tune
By the river flowing across the lane
Making my soul embrace the freedom even more
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Getting drowned In the river of love Making the soul Embrace the freedom. Make it simple Varsha
This is such an insightful, beautiful poem, and the imagery is exquisite.
Beautifully written. I think it’s your best as it is more cogent and thoughtfully expressed. That’s quite a river of love.
Lovely. The river of love flows lovingly in this poem. Danke for sharing.
Such a beautiful poem on love. Brilliantly written and straight from the heart. Thanks for sharing.
A magnificent piece of poetry... captivating poetic expression! Loved it...5 stars
I like the second stanza the most