Tuesday, December 1, 2020

River Of Love.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

The meticulous play of melodious tune
By the river flowing across the lane
Making my soul embrace the freedom even more
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Varsha M
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 October 2022

I like the second stanza the most

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Suresh Kumar Ek 02 December 2020

Getting drowned In the river of love Making the soul Embrace the freedom. Make it simple Varsha

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 01 December 2020

This is such an insightful, beautiful poem, and the imagery is exquisite.

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Clyde King 01 December 2020

Beautifully written. I think it’s your best as it is more cogent and thoughtfully expressed. That’s quite a river of love.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 01 December 2020

Lovely. The river of love flows lovingly in this poem. Danke for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 December 2020

Such a beautiful poem on love. Brilliantly written and straight from the heart. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2020

A magnificent piece of poetry... captivating poetic expression! Loved it...5 stars

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