Saturday, August 20, 2016

River Of Life (Haiku) Comments

Rating: 3.5

In River of Life
I swim upstream with support
From God and Humans.
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NHIEN NGUYEN MD
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Dung Nguyen 21 August 2016

Beautiful poem! Your Haiku poem River Of Life is so meaningful, and powerful. Good work.

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Nhien Nguyen 21 August 2016

Thanks for reading and your nice comments. Nhien

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 August 2016

Nicely done... In a mere 17 syllables, Haiku's requirement, you deliver a message of a Gospel reading...powerful, and fueled by Faith in God and Trust in your fellow Man ~FjR-'16~

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Nhien Nguyen 21 August 2016

Thank you for reading my poem. I appreciate your comments. Nhien

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