Thursday, April 16, 2020

River Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Leaving behind the yesterday's sun set,
though it was pink and heart catching,
though pleasant winds have started to blow,
and the heat stroke affected ones,
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Rajnish Manga 17 April 2020

the sun rise is my fate ultimate, good time moves faster it's bad and may be slow.... //.... A cautious portrayal with lots of positivity and hope.

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Kumarmuni Mahakul 17 April 2020

Dear elder brother, it's a beautiful poem! Always read me. My only ambition is to kill someone, please help me!

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 April 2020

Very nice poem. 'good time moves faster it's bad and may be slow, sweetheart I am sure without a mask on your face, '..is beautiful. Loved it.

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