Saturday, December 31, 2011

River Of Lies Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm lost
in a river of lies
Caught in the current
of this human trait
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Dave Alan Walker
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Adeline Foster 11 April 2012

Truth can be found if only one does recognize that the lies come from within man. Truth takes reassessment and research. Adeline

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Ebi Robert 03 January 2012

poetry that does not only teach us but read us. Good job here.

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Shadow Girl 02 January 2012

Sadly too true, well conveyed -SG

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Neetha Sasidharan 01 January 2012

wow! ! ! dis is the reality..u hv penned it grt poem.

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Silentpoet Grl 01 January 2012

powerful poem - sadly so true - great write!

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Swetha V 31 December 2011

yes sir you are right. their is no true face

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Vipins Puthooran 31 December 2011

Yes, it's the truth! ! ! people with two faces! ! This traits are more dangerous like viruses and they will nullify everything in us! ! ! I hate their peek and snook! ! ! A great poem! ! 10+++

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Sajna Kailas 31 December 2011

yeah you are very correct.this world is full of fake identities and liars. cant found any noblest among the rampaging humanity. good work Dave! loved it! God Bless You! ! ! ! ! ! !

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