Thursday, July 6, 2017

River Kunhar Comments

Rating: 5.0

All the rivers are not under your control.
You the proud mountains,
the queen of northern lands
has lovely arms and shoulders
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Savita Tyagi 19 July 2017

Rivers always change their course and in its workings Nature always creates new green pastures. Very nice to see your picture by that beautiful river picture. Thanks for sharing Akhtar Ji.

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Dear Akhtar Sahab! Is that you in the picture? If that is you, i am so happy to see the wonderful poet! Yes! Sometimes, mountains do seem so proud and stubborn! The rivers flowing smoothly and gracefully cannot be underestimated.! An interesting comparison! 100+++

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Akhtar Jawad 18 July 2017

Yes, it's me.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2017

You might not be seeing those daughters of mighty mountains but I can see and I can predict. Green lands will be greener in the future. Let's hope so. Beautifully narrated poem with a great hope for green land and alive nature. Thanks for sharing sir.

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Loke Kok Yee 06 July 2017

The picture of you is a great distraction from your lovely poem. I am lost for words to describe that distinguished looking gentleman in the picture. Thank you sir!

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