Thursday, August 23, 2012

River Girl Comments

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I was walking by the river one day,
When I saw a young girl throw something away.
She removed it from her hand,
Then with her foot stamped it into snow white sand.
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R. K. Hart
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Ray Hart 25 August 2012

Thank very much for they kind comments. I try hard to make my writing worth your time. I am not a talented person just a trier. My best to you and yours, Ray

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Knight Fizzstorm 23 August 2012

Very entralling poem, sir.

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R. K. Hart

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