Friday, April 1, 2011

River And Train Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our river so soft today
and beautifully grey
singing wisps of branches
tickling it on either side
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Shalyn Stachmus 09 August 2012

This is...amazing. It's so wonderfully descriptive! ! Your style reminds me of Robert Frost's imagery, although I can see that your style is uniquely different. And great. :)

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Miroslava Odalovic 04 December 2011

It's a beautiful poem Pam, loved each word, sound fragrance and taste of it. Beautiful.

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