River A-Flow Comments

I wish to know the worlds energy flow So I follow the rivers and streams they come from lakes, ponds, and ground a-hollow there I learned what it means To be the start of something...........................YOU HAVE TO FOLLOW THE ORIGINAL SOURCE AND THERE U MAY COME ACROSS THE SOURCE OF ENERGY.... LOVELY POEM. I LIKED IT.....10 READ MINE..... GLOBAL WARMING, , , , WHY DO WE LOVE NATURE...

'there i learnt what it means to be the start of something' Brilliant! Another one of those moments of poetic genius that litter your work! !