River Comments
And you etch
Your name on my soul
With your lips.
My life becomes a mighty river
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This is one of the poems I had composed during my college days, when I was in love. I had not shared any of them nor have I ever published them. This is the First Time ever.
Sir, you can write anything, present anything....every bit of presentation is part of poetry dear poet. Never compromise your writing style!
One of the poems I had composed for my Lady Love, in my college days. I thought, it is time shared it with my friends on PoemHunter.
The source of mighty river in you is someone's lips, the great fountain....wonderful contemplation. I find terrific poetic depth in this little poem.
Who can fathom the depths of love? And it's currents? It's waywardness? Thank you, Dilipji for your most encouraging observations. Obliged Sir.
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7/23/2025 4:20:42 PM # 1.0.0
Life is a continuous flow, may slow down a bit here or there, but it continues its flow…. and love adds spice to it…