River Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

River

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And you etch
Your name on my soul
With your lips.
My life becomes a mighty river
That flows back into itself.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Life is a continuous flow, may slow down a bit here or there, but it continues its flow…. and love adds spice to it…

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This is one of the poems I had composed during my college days, when I was in love. I had not shared any of them nor have I ever published them. This is the First Time ever.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2022

Sir, you can write anything, present anything....every bit of presentation is part of poetry dear poet. Never compromise your writing style!

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 March 2022

Thank you for appreciating my works, Sir.

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

One of the poems I had composed for my Lady Love, in my college days. I thought, it is time shared it with my friends on PoemHunter.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2022

The source of mighty river in you is someone's lips, the great fountain....wonderful contemplation. I find terrific poetic depth in this little poem.

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

Who can fathom the depths of love? And it's currents? It's waywardness? Thank you, Dilipji for your most encouraging observations. Obliged Sir.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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