Sunday, February 11, 2018

River Comments

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My mind is a river, my thoughts are its bed.
Made up of words left unsaid.
Flowing across the land,
this river carries so much pollution and debris.
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Katrina Lusk
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Aqua Flower 11 February 2018

The imagery is fantastic in this poem. This was very well-penned!

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 February 2018

Splashing against rocks, and pushing on the banks. These waters become violent.. river cleanses me and remove pollution from my own thoughts and make my river bed of mind pure....... thank you .. very good alliteration........... river, mind, thank you. tony

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Katrina Lusk

Katrina Lusk

Ft. Wayne IN.
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