River Comments

Flow through the river is a part of Water Cycle.... Nicely depicted the fact.... Thank you for sharing with us.

A poem of great depth so beautifully written. I concur to the wonderful comments of the great Poet Akhtar Jawad. Onto my Poem List.

Beautiful poem, dear poet

excellent writings Sir- ferries in freight of foreign dust which is not the me such as I am now.the stream cannot migrate me across years to my source

The cycle of a river is just like the cycle of life. Clouds rise from the seas and rain, giving water to rivers and fall back in the seas to rise again as clouds. The question arises whether we shall get another life like the clouds? Who knows? So let us be peaceful in our beliefs.

... I am now.the stream cannot migrate me across years to my source............................................................ It needs third eye to activate for that journey. Poets can. Thank you. Pranab k c

a poem of the river of life that flows within all of us? ............well written Yoonoos

A typhoon of passion! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

Nice write - enjoyed

Fabulous poem thanks for sharing

Excellent. Beautifully written Sir. Thanks for sharing it.

Such mastery of words, bended to flow like your river, enough to stimulate our minds beyond poetry..thanks for sharing Yoonoos...please read OH DEATH.

Your poem left me speechless for a while.thanks for sharing

Thank you for sharing this poem with me.; Life and creation have been compared with River.The imagery and metaphor flowed well. The first life was born in the shape of a small green plant and when we shake hands with the sea, hardly any word is spoken out. Because, that's the ultimate goal of life. I liked your presentation, my friend, .Good luck and good health be with you always. Rajkumar

The poem is quite imaginative, though tough to understand.

This, i found interesting, although i feel as though i did not understand it completely. Thank you.

Yoonoos, I love the imaginative phrases in this poem. Not simply writing the expected but the unexpected and furthering depth in your poesy. A wonderful piece. Thanks so much for sharing, Greetings, Paul

Outstanding write, with such depths of feeling for the river's ever-changing moods, it's characteristics and it's journey through farmland and towns all bringing their own stamp of character!

beautiful flow of word

Love the structure and the flow of your words.