Rival Blades V.2 Comments

that was awsome..very breath taking...your a VERY good writer...you write with powerful words...~hazel ♥

Please tell me you are the savior in this epic... lol... and about the hurtin him thing.. isn't that what friends are for? (the physical pain.. not the emotional one) . You two are obviously a force to be reckoned with when together.. ya know the apple does't fall far from the tree... your mom was just as bad lol! ! Love ya... keep writing, ok? I WANT MORE.. I WANT MORE! ! !

David, I really like this poem. Don't listen to your mom's comment. Poems never beat trying to dream up ways to hurt him. LOL. Violence is the answer. LOL. Well, it is with me and my friends. Keep writing. Love ya little cousin. Love Always, Shannah Banana

Hey, it beats trying to dream up how to hurt him the next time you see him in school... may you always have him as your best friend, they're hard to come by... love ya son