Ritual Of Alienation Comments

Very powerfully and movingly crafted with artistic brilliance.

Came and read this beauty again. I relax in its extraordinary beauty while I gravely examine its darker sides and pray that poetry still lives in the veins of some of our writers be they poets or novelists Top marks for an extraordinary write. yes I know I've used that word twice but it expresses my feelings so well! ! !

Dear Rose; always your lovely comment enrich the theme of the poems, and lead the readers to a new way of understanding, thank you again, wish you to be on the top 500 always, Oh Dear professional poet and critic Rose...all the best

Another masterpiece, Soran. A poetic gem that will find its way home in the hearts of many readers. I have to put this beauty to my Poem List which I should have done the very first time I read this poem.

A poignant yet beautiful poem that depicts death. Liked the ultimate stanza. A great twist where hope and life made a great impact on the whole write.

Revisiting this wonderful poem that speaks volume. Again, the great Poet could grip a reader by the power and depth of his words. The opening lines have this effect. So engrossing. " ..Just dry leaves seeking their destiny after waving goodbye to the trees." Beautiful lines...

Thanks so much for spending time to read my humble work, I would appreciate your way of understanding the poem, Wish you every success, Regards

So beautiful! Soft and delicate. Fills the heart with all the tender emotions that life has to offer even in the face of adversity. Thank you for sharing this superb poem.

Dear great poet and professional critic Susan...your honest comment and amazing discovery makes every one happy.. Then we can be sure that the poetry world is fine; while there are some examples of Susan still existed and knwowing what is the meaning of poetry....really I am speechless and donot know how to thank you...excellent Madam Susan

Perfect! ! ! Perfect! ! ! Perfect! ! ! I think my heart stuttered in admiration of your poetic skills, depth of emotional grasp, and dream-like yet reality based scenes... This is the best poem on this site, bar none. Onto my fav list,10+++++++++++++++ and you are one awesome poet, Soran and I look forward to reading more of the LITERATURE you produce! ! !

A superb and sublimely brilliant piece of work. Beautifully written with many hidden depths and avenues, to make any reader stop and think and be self aware. And ending on my favourite virtue, hope Glorious, eternal hope. Thank you for writing and sharing this captivating and equally enchanting poem Soran. Rated 10++ and added your good self and this wondrous poem to my favourite poet and poem list. And may you and the loved ones around you live a long life filled with virtue. Take care man.

Seasons and reasons! ! Paths of love and life, Watching your steps along the line. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I cite you here: All the rhythm of the seasons is stopped.....................but life goes on, on one side without rhythm and on the other side with rhythm, like you pictured here, the yellow rose reacts at the hum of bees.A sublimest poem, excellently worded. Lovely!

Though frozen sidewalks, when there is a flower that reacts at the hums of bees, there is life and especially when there is a rose flirting at the bees, there is love, when there is love in life, there is happiness and life is OK and finest. Superb poem though tad simplified. Thank you for sharing, I have enjoyed this lovely poem. A 10 Full Score

The cycle of life leads us to that ritual of alienation. It is inevitable. A beautiful poem with superb imagery.