Rite Of Passage Comments

You may have started as coal but life has clearly made you a diamond. You still have the strength after all that to grab another and pull them up? My dear poet, I don't want to walk in your shoes, I want to be you! More poems please!

Bravo! From the very first line you hold the reader and not allow it him to get away! Very good original creation. You have a definite talent. Wish you all the best for the contest. But you cannot predict anything in an Online Contest like this - which can be easily manipulated by cyber savvy poets! ! (See my poem Poem Hunter Contest Final just to have an idea of how a contest can be manipulated...)

Sunprincess has exactly said. a great write.

what a great poem with such meaning

I sank right in to your heavy words, great poem!

I like the overall effect of this poem. I always wondered how someone else would handle walking in my shoes or vice vesa.

Wow, def know the headaches and dizzyness from vertigo! Really good poem!