Monday, October 22, 2012

Risk Of Losing Peace Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have lost it somewhere during the long journeys,
When thinking of one or more incidents and agonies,
I might have let someone to steal it from me,
I might have been careless to lose it to a snatcher,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Karen Sinclair 27 October 2012

So touching, , , i understand this write fully, my favourite line is I wore the ignorant efforts of high heels without any research, ...oh the recklessness of youth....i also love how the final word block more than stops this write to a finality.. fullstop... tyvm karer

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