Sunday, January 14, 2007

Rising With The Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Colour me bright yellow, so I reflect the sun,
Let me sink down gently when the day is done,
Rising with the morning, summer's warmth inbue,
Shining with the happiness of always loving you.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 23 July 2009

This is one of your very best Ernestine, a wonderful theme and beautifully written. One to keep. Love, Andy xx

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Kate Beamish 17 January 2008

I have just discovered this one - researching poems on 'colours' for our poetry reading group. Will definitely be taking this one!

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Esther Leclerc 18 January 2007

Beautiful, Ernestine - the use of color and seasons is very effective. Always ending in love, very satisfying and tender. Again, beautiful...

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Duncan Wyllie 16 January 2007

This poem has so many fine elements to it, warmth, colour, positive out-look, so endearing Thankyou darling! another one of your greats I think! Love duncan X

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Asma Bahrainwala 15 January 2007

a lovely poem, Ernestine...a riot of colours and really very soothing images... Asma...

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Sandra Fowler 14 January 2007

A poem filled with color, light and music. Beautifully composed. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 January 2007

A Kaleidoscopic masterpiece, my dear...such vivid imagery, is almost palpable to the senses.....Sterling (AS IN COLOR ME SILVER) Work, here, young poetess... FJR

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