Rising Tides Comments

Rising tides of sea and of life beautifully compared, and the poem flows beautifully unlike the sea

Definitely dark thought would end here. Life should appear cheerfully. Lanterns get blown by the wind is very interesting and nice with imagery. Excellent poem. /10

You are on a poetic fury. How can I keep with you - you river of beauty?

nice rhyming poem citing the facts of life - enjoyed every line Mam. Wen we are down just look up to God, He is always there with us for our support and help in times of strife. well described the harsh realities of Life and their effects on us.

Yet again - I'm a part of this poem. From the beginning to the end I’m cruising through the lines and every word strokes me like I’ve resided or residing that life. You have meaning, you have feeling, you have genuine characters breathing in your words and poems.

Lanterns get blown by the wind. Very interesting imagery is drawn here with wise vision. A marvelous work shared here, ...10

Great rhythm and flow with wonderful imagery as we are all tossed in life's storms we must be guided by God to withstand the force of any trouble that might come our way! Great write!

Life is a journey on the sea guided by the unexpected nature of waves. Yet man explores to see new shores and distant lands overseas. Uncertainties must be tackled time and again.

faithfully written. Thanks

I loved the rich imagery of the sea tossed up in this poem. Finally, as you have said it, when there is no one to support our drooping head, it is best to seek His divine help and support.

Superb poem yet again with some thought provoking lines: On our shoulders when life becomes a crushing load To whom else shall we seek for aid, but the Lord?

Great wisdom Valsa and very well told We have gone through it and we are now old This timely advice the younger generation must hold Thank you