Tuesday, November 24, 2015

Rising This New Ray Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the womb of Eastern Sky
Taking birth child sun is new
With new crying of light this
We feel cheerful moments sure.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dogma Daniman 17 October 2020

Rising of new rays bring new hope and living essence. This poem is very interesting one.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 April 2019

Rising from the day.. beautifully expressed.. good 10

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Pushpendra Patel 19 February 2019

Freshness scribbles new thought. This we witness through nature. This is a lovely poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 March 2016

Freshness! ! Wisdom and life; with the muse of nature. Nice piece of work.

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Hazel Durham 01 December 2015

The beauty of nature has a huge impact on people as they watch the rising sun in awe of it's glorious splendour, it's rays warm our hearts and souls with joy that shine from our eyes! Great write, so beautiful!

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M Asim Nehal 25 November 2015

Yet another masterpiece, after reading your poems I feel like I should live with nature rather than in concrete jungle.10++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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