Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, December 10, 2009

Rising Sun Comments

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Some people are firm believer of rising sun
Prayers in the morning and then only run
Toil hard to earn bread in hot after noon
Some people do think of star and bright moon
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Kamlesh Ambalal 05 July 2010

Some people are firm believer of rising sun Prayers in the morning and then only run Toil hard to earn bread in hot after noon Some people do think of star and bright moon.. all pray rising sun as good belief....10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 December 2009

speaks of many things about some issues... very deep! nice rhyme pattern of aabb.

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Louis Rams 29 December 2009

the rising sun is within you, and helping others is what you do.

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David Oluwatobi Akinola 17 December 2009

Good job, nice concept.

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Catrina Heart 10 December 2009

meaningful theme...great thoughts to shared....well said and nicely formed! ! !

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Merna Ibrahim 10 December 2009

A strong and profound thoughts.....Good Job! ! 10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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