Wednesday, March 12, 2008

Rising Soul Comments

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Insideous pockets of depleted air
Scattered throughout shifting soil
Noting a brim of mental reflection
I no longer wish to toil
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Edwin Robinette
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Original Unknown Girl 18 March 2008

Great poem, love the last stanza, good rythmn to it. HG: -) xx

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Edwin Robinette

Edwin Robinette

Cumberland, Maryland
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