Rising Soul Comments

Not sure the end. But i like your thoughts. Rising to a dream. Can a dream be real?

Teaching the worth of life in this poem. Yes, souls, ghosts can see most probably best the damage of humankind. A wonderful poem.

I can feel the souls as they traverse the night. Nice write. Blessings.

Precious write..love this short piece my nice brother..Good write! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

jus a few words with a whole lot of deepth n meaning, i like, i liked it

Provocative and thoughtful...a new way to look at life,